麻煩哪位英語高手幫忙翻譯一句純正點的謝謝

你好
  x4 V; T: s% ~/ ]  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

原帖由 rr2005 於 2006-8-19 01:15 發表
你好
1 Y+ N7 i2 e6 ~' ~7 s7 N! X  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

& _2 X  s) B, G6 l, S( Bthe check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.
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as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?
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翻的不錯~~~

熱心助人＋

原帖由 中國VIP俱樂部 於 2006-9-14 17:51 發表


the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

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$ c9 ~' O( [/ I更地道和直接一點的翻譯如下:
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2 a& q% T1 t, o: N8 [. MDear Sir/Madam:

4 R) x8 z% T, v- R/ d4 \We haven't received your last payment.

We will move to a new premises therefore please re-send the last and future payment to the following address.
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We are looking forward to hearing from you.
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" o: R2 l, R1 e好心助人並無心冒犯

supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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感謝各位積極幫助他人

原帖由 段續風 於 2006-10-8 17:11 發表
supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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Dear Sir/lady
% T$ _' B$ z: a5 Y5 ki have not recived the check that it's send by your company last month,because i'll remove my house,so kindly pls re-send the check to my new address,the new address detail as below:
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8 u% c0 d% }& @# t8 m3 E* M0 Glooking forward you kindly reply.
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that it's send  改成 that was sent

Dear Sir/Madam
$ G7 D. y$ J- e1 G+ Z9 ]. }' `' hI have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:

Best Regards!
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8 E) s& Z! S& y1 U( aYours sincerely
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