麻煩哪位英語高手幫忙翻譯一句純正點的謝謝

你好
  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

原帖由 rr2005 於 2006-8-19 01:15 發表
6 W1 i" |# P. F# `6 e9 o- g你好
2 a' L# T5 B; r" F: M  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

/ z; l* f# ?6 d0 m8 I9 w! _the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

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翻的不錯~~~

熱心助人＋

原帖由 中國VIP俱樂部 於 2006-9-14 17:51 發表

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+ ^2 _5 R* L) c& pthe check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

: `% n* E, j+ J0 Ras I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?
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" ^" @' I: U+ F# j% S/ S更地道和直接一點的翻譯如下:

Dear Sir/Madam:

We haven't received your last payment.

We will move to a new premises therefore please re-send the last and future payment to the following address.

# R! y& r5 }5 m/ ?3 z" j. qWe are looking forward to hearing from you.
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Regards

XXX
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supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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原帖由 段續風 於 2006-10-8 17:11 發表
: ~% I6 f; t9 T$ A" msupercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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多謝指點
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Dear Sir/lady
% W" {$ y; r* B/ @* D3 yi have not recived the check that it's send by your company last month,because i'll remove my house,so kindly pls re-send the check to my new address,the new address detail as below:

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thanks&Best Regards

that it's send  改成 that was sent

Dear Sir/Madam
I have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:
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Best Regards!
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Yours sincerely
XXXXX
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