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【每日改寫練習】2013.12.13

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發表於 2013-12-13 16:13:10 | 顯示全部樓層 |閱讀模式
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Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.  
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  1. Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.
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2. 中級改寫版(結合樂樂改21改點以及口訣)
7 l2 {9 {* Y% ^( I. |7 E2 B+ X這個例子,包括以後的例子裡,大家一定要記住:
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  1. A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there』s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.
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3. 高級改寫版(結合改寫分析工具結果,自由發揮)
  1. Do you have a case for your camera? It』s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an 「ugly」 camera but I like it so much that I won』t exchange it for any other cameras.
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發表於 2013-12-13 16:25:50 | 顯示全部樓層
勉強 I've learnt a lot thx4 w- ], m% B3 a9 M6 Z. y1 r
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發表於 2013-12-13 16:56:40 | 顯示全部樓層
簡易改寫版居然能通過, copyscape也太....7 v: u4 _* l/ ?4 E6 t

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copyscape说能通过还是能通过的哈,虽然叫简易改写,但是和TBS还是完全不同的  發表於 2013-12-13 20:24
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發表於 2013-12-13 20:11:54 | 顯示全部樓層
簡易版過不了谷歌,單純的替換關鍵詞,谷歌能識別5 s8 S  ]/ s; z* a7 {! N

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he is a boy 替换成 she is a girl. 不认为google会认为这是一句话,里面还有有些技巧的  發表於 2013-12-13 20:45
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發表於 2013-12-13 20:33:51 | 顯示全部樓層
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在啊,要是没有回复再给我发一下消息,有时候消息可能没有处理到 不好意思啊  發表於 2013-12-13 20:38
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發表於 2013-12-13 20:42:21 | 顯示全部樓層
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怎麼不上QQ了啊
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你那个问题 我在等你上线哈 已经聊上了 :)  發表於 2013-12-13 20:56
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發表於 2013-12-13 22:12:34 | 顯示全部樓層
掩面,俺需要回爐重新學習英語
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