請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！

I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,
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" @# ]; @/ v0 u" K! i6 EI have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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Regards,
[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
8 C  S1 [  A3 z# z" G: e2 F謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

- ]  X- {/ f6 }/ s樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。

來個更地道一點的：
+ T( A/ |6 H! D3 |Recent payment was received with many thanks.
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9 L  p) u; }5 `But it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?

7 S9 K' `. G1 I- {1 u& yI look forward to hearing from you.