請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下

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地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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' j& @, k1 W1 Y$ {1 JI have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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[Correct Address]

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[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
0 O' l1 c; P6 M& x6 O6 h謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下

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$ O/ {/ y1 M) R: I4 n7 }試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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Recent payment was received with many thanks.

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9 \+ ~: ^% x4 [/ l- p( ?1 _Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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I look forward to hearing from you.