本帖最後由 樂樂 於 2013-12-13 16:16 編輯
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camera case
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Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.
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1. 簡易改寫版(幾乎不需要英語基礎。。。)- Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.
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這個例子,包括以後的例子裡,大家一定要記住:( w( X8 B( w* T6 I
定語從句一定要掌握好,改寫裡很重要,不管是否有樂樂改教程或者dofast教程,改寫者一定要掌握。- A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there』s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.
複製代碼 3. 高級改寫版(結合改寫分析工具結果,自由發揮)- Do you have a case for your camera? It』s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an 「ugly」 camera but I like it so much that I won』t exchange it for any other cameras.
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