aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
; D- I& ~8 v! R4 u我來給你說說吧!7 i4 o8 D* P) g) m7 \* _, y. x& L$ A
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
}" K7 v( m' P6 J- N: vDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... : y1 e( v/ d7 i, _! c
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit./ [6 e/ G# d$ w* U
" n! \8 D" z0 O- K同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
: I; G+ H- ?; Q8 S5 r9 @1 K他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
% G9 ^$ ]9 u/ l( h樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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! [0 [9 Y3 B5 n @You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.. R2 }/ _, e9 b7 v
就再次變得自然了
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