【每日改寫練習】2013.12.12

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How to choose your right shower basket

When choosing shower baskets there are many to choose from and the prices are all different, it depends where you purchase the products. For instance, you can purchase cheap baskets at local stores, or perhaps find the baskets online.  

樂樂改 改寫分析工具結果

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1. 簡易改寫版（幾乎不需要英語基礎。。。）

1. Whenever selecting shower baskets generally there are plenty to select from plus the prices tend to be all different, it will depend on exactly where you buy the products. For instance, one can buy cheap baskets at local stores or maybe choose the baskets online.

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2. 中級改寫版（結合樂樂改21改點以及口訣）

1. When people choose shower baskets, they will find they have many choices with different prices which is depended on where they purchase the products. For instance, there are cheap baskets at local stores or some other baskets online.

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3. 高級改寫版（結合改寫分析工具結果，自由發揮）

1. Where to buy the best shower baskets? At local stores where you can purchase cheap baskets or purchase them online where there are many with different prices to choose from. Well, keep reading, we will help you find your answer.

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樂樂又有時間啦。哈哈
希望工作進展順利!
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求大神指點，我輸入http://www.copyscape.com/， 只出現了」Search for copies of your page on the web.「， 並沒有」Paste text or URL「，沒法檢測文章啊，這是為何？
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多謝。我是用相關主題文章的評論拼湊改寫成文章的，能否在問下，文章的評論應該也會被谷歌收錄，但是應該不會跟文章一樣那麼精準吧？我需要大動干戈改寫嗎？文章的目的只是為了讓google判斷為原創而已

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Lis-Y 發表於 2013-12-12 20:07
/ T- M( ^+ R5 h' d, K多謝。我是用相關主題文章的評論拼湊改寫成文章的，能否在問下，文章的評論應該也會被谷歌收錄，但是應該不 ...

! w6 T8 ]( @7 Q5 O* Q2 L9 |- A" ?, ~實際上文章與文章評論在google看來是一個整體（都在一個頁面上），評論可以看成文章的一部分，同樣影響著單個頁面的關鍵詞密度
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這個改寫水平高，要多學習，多看這個牛人的帖子

月光飛燕 發表於 2013-12-12 20:16
實際上文章與文章評論在google看來是一個整體（都在一個頁面上），評論可以看成文章的一部分，同樣影響著 ...

Now I understand. Thank you very much.

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I am very interested in your "link 2", I hope I can read it eariler, I guess I will benefit a lot from it. I would like to keep active in our forum. Thanks for sharing, you do a good job.
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從樂版這學到很多，支持下樂老師。
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樓上點評很有幫助，多謝

樂樂出品，必屬精品
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